Assalamualaikum and peace be upon you...
Day of the Pious,
5th day of the month Weod-monath,
Year of the Caminus Canis,
16th of being a slave to a slave...
___________ooOoo___________
oo(O)oo
LADY ICE, SCRAWNY SCARECROW
(this and every posts after are the continued versions of the story first written on 31st May 2006)
___________ooOoo___________
oo(O)oo
- to be continued (yet again) -
___________ooOoo___________
oo(O)oo
like Adam in paradise
like Adam in paradise,
with the things marked with nice,
where deeds still blanket the unknown vice,
where pleasures comes with no price,
where no worries one would come to realise,
man would live in the truest of lies.
like Adam under the forbideen tree,
when the snake snoop with a sinister glee,
in moments when bliss is just about to flee,
with trials which a bosom would ask as fees,
when light is seen like what the blind sees,
man would lay on a bed of bees.
___________ooOoo___________
oo(O)oo
In another time,another tale will come.
maybe,
of the things,the Demon saw as a Slave to a Slave.
but for now,
the Demon would only want to rest.
___________ooOoo___________
oo(O)oo
_______THANK YOU_______
_______O_______
7 comments:
do continue soon and i wont mind if u start on that story (for another time) too. heh.
nice piece, i'll wait for the rest of these story
thank u for ur visit
Slaam sjeathera and cognrutaloitans!
LADY INN;
I will, I will, and I will start the storu (for anotehr) time in a few days time.
LADY SUE;
I thank you for your visit and compliment.
LADY MEEN;
Salam sejahtera to you too and thank you. Do leave the link to place so that others might visit your beautifull site.
ur tales always touches me.. and hope u well my d.. :)
No beautifull site to link, no intention of creating one..i think.
No beautifull creative writing talent in me, merely enjoying blog reading for free...heeheehee. (and make new friends)
GOMENNASAI!!
Wish i had written this.
the poem is lovely.
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